The charts below show the protein and calorie intakes of people in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the protein and calorie intakes of people in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram
provide
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information relating to
the
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protein
and
calorie
consumption in various regions over the globe.
Overall
, it can be seen that North
America
exceededly consumed both the standard of reasonable
calorie
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calories
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as well as
protein
,
whereas
the opposite trend was true for the other nations.
Additionally
, the
absorbtion
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absorption
of
protein
primarily
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extracted from different sources which contributed to the
rich
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of
calorie
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calories
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, with the exception
India
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of India
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where animal
protein
predominated over
other
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others
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one
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. When it comes to the consumption of
protein
, India and East Africa witnessed an equalization on other
protein
at around 15,
nonetheless
, there was a minute discrepancy on those taken from animals at accurately 3 units, with the East Africa dominated. In terms of the Americas area, Latin
America
possessed the level of other
protein
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proteins
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at approximately 32, which
more
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than two times in comparison with animal one. Regarding the
overconsumped
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overconsumed
nation of both
protein
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, the animal
protein
was only 18,
while
other
protein
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proteins
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surpassed over 44 units. Moving to the
calorie
intake, India and East Africa,which were much
more
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lower than the ideal
absorbtion
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absorption
, recharged only 2000 and nearly 2400
calorie
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calories
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, respectively. With
respects
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to
remaining
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nations, Latin
America
was
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nearly
reach
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the standard of
calorie
intake at around 3000,whilst North
America
was redundant over 350
calorie
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calories
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.
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