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The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago nad how it looks like now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago nad how it looks like now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
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The given diagram demonstrates the current central
library
 floor
plan
 and the one that existed twenty years ago.
Overall
, the map underwent several developments including self-service checkouts and a
computer
room
.
However
, the reading rooms for magazines and newspapers disappeared.
To begin
 with, in the past, the central
library
plan
 had an enquiry desk to the right of the entrance, it was
then
 replaced with a cafe in the modern
plan
. And to the left, the reading
room
 has changed to a new
computer
room
, a way of attracting a new generation to the
library
.
Besides
computer
room
 has all the reference
books
 which was once an adult fiction section.
Likewise
, the opposite of
this
, comprises adult fiction
books
, information desk and self-service machines that were previously an adult non-fiction
books
 category.
Furthermore
, to the north-east of the new floor
plan
 is the lecture
room
 which was a children's
books
 area, now modernised to assist people who are trying to do research and related work. The opposite of
this
 has children's fiction
books
, sofas and other events like storytelling that were CDs, videos and
computer
 games in the past.
Additionally
, the old
plan
 has tables and chairs at the centre of the
library
 which were removed,
instead
, a sofa has been added to the current
library
 floor
plan
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words library, plan, computer, room, books with synonyms.
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