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The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago nad how it looks like now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago nad how it looks like now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
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The given diagram demonstrates the current central
library
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 floor
plan
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 and the one that existed twenty years ago.
Overall
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, the map underwent several developments including self-service checkouts and a
computer
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room
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.
However
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, the reading rooms for magazines and newspapers disappeared.
To begin
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 with, in the past, the central
library
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plan
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 had an enquiry desk to the right of the entrance, it was
then
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 replaced with a cafe in the modern
plan
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. And to the left, the reading
room
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 has changed to a new
computer
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room
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, a way of attracting a new generation to the
library
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.
Besides
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computer
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room
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 has all the reference
books
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 which was once an adult fiction section.
Likewise
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, the opposite of
this
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, comprises adult fiction
books
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, information desk and self-service machines that were previously an adult non-fiction
books
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 category.
Furthermore
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, to the north-east of the new floor
plan
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 is the lecture
room
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 which was a children's
books
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 area, now modernised to assist people who are trying to do research and related work. The opposite of
this
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 has children's fiction
books
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, sofas and other events like storytelling that were CDs, videos and
computer
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 games in the past.
Additionally
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, the old
plan
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 has tables and chairs at the centre of the
library
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 which were removed,
instead
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, a sofa has been added to the current
library
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 floor
plan
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.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words library, plan, computer, room, books with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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