The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago nad how it looks like now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

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The given diagram demonstrates the current central

library

floor

plan

and the one that existed twenty years ago.

Overall

, the map underwent several developments including self-service checkouts and a

computer

room

However

, the reading rooms for magazines and newspapers disappeared.

To begin

with, in the past, the central

library

plan

had an enquiry desk to the right of the entrance, it was

then

replaced with a cafe in the modern

plan

. And to the left, the reading

room

has changed to a new

computer

room

, a way of attracting a new generation to the

library

Besides

computer

room

has all the reference

books

which was once an adult fiction section.

Likewise

, the opposite of

this

, comprises adult fiction

books

, information desk and self-service machines that were previously an adult non-fiction

books

category.

Furthermore

, to the north-east of the new floor

plan

is the lecture

room

which was a children's

books

area, now modernised to assist people who are trying to do research and related work. The opposite of

this

has children's fiction

books

, sofas and other events like storytelling that were CDs, videos and

computer

games in the past.

Additionally

, the old

plan

has tables and chairs at the centre of the

library

which were removed,

instead

, a sofa has been added to the current

library

floor

plan

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