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The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information and reporting the main features and make comparisons whrere relevant.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information and reporting the main features and make comparisons whrere relevant.
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This
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 diagram compares a central library in a certain city with what it was 20 years ago. The job that used to be for the inquiry
desk
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 is now divided into information help service by humans and machine-based inquiry service; with some other parts changed, people can now feel more comfortable than before.
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when you enter the entrance of the library today, there is a café on your right hand and a computer
room
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 on your left hand, which used to be an inquiry
desk
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 and reading
room
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 20 years ago.
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services dealing with tickets, book rentals, and returns have shifted from person-to-person to computer using self-service machines between the information
desk
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 and the cafe.
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the adult fiction book area was moved to the current location on the right side of the library behind the information
desk
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.
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, the children's
bookcorner
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book corner
 was replaced by the lecture
room
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, and it was given more
room
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 for children's fiction books with two sofas and a space storytelling event on the opposite side.
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, tables and chairs in the
center
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centre
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 and the section on CDs, videos, and computer games were all removed, and the adult non-fiction books seem to be united into the corner of all reference books, which creates more space than before.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words desk, room with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 3 times.
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