More and more tasks we do at home and at work these days are done by robots. Is this a positive or negative development ?

It is true that nowadays

robots

conducting

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many missions, which

is

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done at

home

and at

workplace

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the workplace

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rather than by

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. In

this

essay, the writer

believe

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that

this

trend has a detrimental impact on the employment of workers and isolated depression.

To begin

with, it must be acknowledged that the enhancement of technological achievement is increasing powerfully in the modern age. Developing

in

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artificial technology might lead to a rise in unemployment because of

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by

robots

and machines.

This

is

due to

the accuracy and efficiency of

robots

, which can foster a sense of high productivity in comparison with blue collars.

For instance

, self-driving vehicles cause redundancy in driving jobs

such

as lorry drivers, taxi drivers and bus drivers, which can lead

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sedentary lifestyle as people are out of money and do not have a stable salary to earn a living.

Thus

, technical

robots

able

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to take

job

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jobs

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away from humans, which causes unemployment

to

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a number of

individuals

around the world. Another point that should be considered is that replacing

robots

at

home

or at

workplace

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the workplace

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can pose a risk to the isolation between

individuals

in

digital

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the digital

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era. As a great deal of workload

are

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solved by technological applications

such

as

robots

, there is an

increasing

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in the number of

individuals

become

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unemployed,

therefore

preventing them from interacting with their colleagues.

This

results in an isolation between human

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and

also

reduce

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the ability to work properly in both

home

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and

workplace

.

Furthermore

, it can cause a rise in a variety of health problems

such

as cardiovascular or heart attack, high cholesterol or even respiratory disease because workers not

employ

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in a regular way as they used to. In conclusion, using

robots

at

home

and

workplace

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to accomplish missions not only

cause

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causes

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the redundancy of

individuals

but

also

put

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our

living

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into

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a

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threat as

it

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can make

decision

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without human oversight.