The maps below show the changes in a town after the construction of a hydroelectric power dam. Summarize the information and compare where relevant

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The maps below illustrate the construction of a hydroelectricity dam in

20 year-old

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periods from 1980 to 2000 in an unchanged area.

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, the main changes involve the lake in the

center

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centre

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this

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place, some new facilities in the south and a hydroelectric dam. In 1980,

this

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area had been unexploited with a

river

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which separated the land into 2 parts. On the east, irrigated farmland had been located between the village, mountains and the

river

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. On the west, there

had been

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some large hills, rare plants and animals, ancient structures and

forest

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on the north of

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part. We had some particular changes in

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periods. a part of the

river

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was transformed into a lake.The hydroelectric dam was situated in front of the estuary to generate electricity. The village in the east was replaced by the hotel and the new village moved close to electricity which lined

along

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the

river

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words river with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

154 words

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