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The maps below show the changes in a town after the construction of a hydroelectric power dam. Summarize the information and compare where relevant

The maps below show the changes in a town after the construction of a hydroelectric power dam. Summarize the information and compare where relevant
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The maps below illustrate the construction of a hydroelectricity dam in
20 year-old
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20-year-old
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 periods from 1980 to 2000 in an unchanged area.
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, the main changes involve the lake in the
center
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centre
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 of
this
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 place, some new facilities in the south and a hydroelectric dam. In 1980,
this
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 area had been unexploited with a
river
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 which separated the land into 2 parts. On the east, irrigated farmland had been located between the village, mountains and the
river
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. On the west, there
had been
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were
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 some large hills, rare plants and animals, ancient structures and
forest
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a forest
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 on the north of
this
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 part. We had some particular changes in
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 periods. a part of the
river
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 was transformed into a lake.The hydroelectric dam was situated in front of the estuary to generate electricity. The village in the east was replaced by the hotel and the new village moved close to electricity which lined
along
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apply
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the
river
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.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words river with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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