Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

A multitude of people declare that the best way for

successful

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career is learning at

university

or

colleage

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college

,

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others think that after school , people should get a job straight. The writer of

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. It can be

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that there are several reasons for some people believe that studying at

university

is the best choice to become successful. First of all, the education in

college

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a

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good quality and the study

progames

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programmes

programs

are managed extremely logic.

Secondly

, the learners are supervised and guided by

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professionals

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professional

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of

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different fields, so students have accurate navigation

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on

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their studying.

However

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others say that it is better to get a job straight after school because they think students will have more practical experience in real life than at

university

. To explain

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, students can apply for some jobs suitable

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their career, so they will have soon experience and

easier

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to

success

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than

study

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studying

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theory at

college

. In conclusion, both

of

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studying at

university

or

college

and

get

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a job straight after school have different advantages. So

that

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I believe student

shoul

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should

participate

university

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in university

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or

college

and spend their free time

on

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trying some kind of part-time

jobs

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to gain practical experience and

also

improve their knowledge range about real life.