The graph shows the number of people taking part in 4 kinds of sports in a particular region between 1985 and 2005.. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line graph compared the number of players participating in four different kinds of sports in one country for twenty years.
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, it can be seen apparently that Rugby had a downward trend,
while
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there was an upward in Tennis throughout the period. Meanwhile, the rest of
sports
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the sports
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categories stayed at the same level for two decades. In the beginning, there were around 250
people
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taking part in
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the Rugby
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Rugby
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the Rugby
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section
then
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dramatically decreased to 200 and 50, in 1995 and 2005, respectively. In the meantime, Tennis had 150 players in the initial year, before the figure gradually rose to 200
people
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in the same year with a previous sport. Afterwards, there were 220
people
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playing Tennis, in 2005.
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, about 60
people
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enrolled in Basketball in the first year and steadily remained until the end of the period.
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, Badminton was chosen to play by only 50
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, in 1985, which eventually slightly went to just below 50 ten years later.
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, the figure climbed up to the previous level before staying at
this
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point for a decade.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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