The graph shows the number of people taking part in 4 kinds of sports in a particular region between 1985 and 2005.. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph compared the number of players participating in four different kinds of sports in one country for twenty years.
Overall
, it can be seen apparently that Rugby had a downward trend, while
there was an upward in Tennis throughout the period. Meanwhile, the rest of sports
categories stayed at the same level for two decades.
In the beginning, there were around 250 Correct article usage
the sports
people
taking part in Correct article usage
the Rugby
Rugby
section Correct article usage
the Rugby
then
dramatically decreased to 200 and 50, in 1995 and 2005, respectively. In the meantime, Tennis had 150 players in the initial year, before the figure gradually rose to 200 people
in the same year with a previous sport. Afterwards, there were 220 people
playing Tennis, in 2005.
Furthermore
, about 60 people
enrolled in Basketball in the first year and steadily remained until the end of the period. Additionally
, Badminton was chosen to play by only 50 people
, in 1985, which eventually slightly went to just below 50 ten years later. Then
, the figure climbed up to the previous level before staying at this
point for a decade.Submitted by saiparnwc on
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