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Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the nineteenth century. The map below shows the development of the village. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the development of the village.

Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the nineteenth century. The map below shows the development of the village. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the development of the village.
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The given figure illustrates the development of a village called Chorleywood near London between 1868 to 1994,
due to
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 its gradual increase in
the
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population
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.
Overall
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, the
population
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 growth had a significant rise in the eastern
side
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 of the village during the
last
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 period.
In addition
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, construction of the access roads had taken a major part of
this
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. Looking at the access, Chorleywood
initially
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 had two main roads, crossing them almost Northwestern
side
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However
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, a railway facility was introduced in 1909, in the southern
side
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 of the area.
Finally
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, in 1970, a new motorway was constructed on the eastern
side
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. Considering demographic strategies, the initial
population
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 was situated near Chorleywood Park, on
right-hand
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side
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 of the main road in 1868. Following
this
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 period,
another dwelling
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 were installed near to previous area, just below it, from 1883 to 1992.
Then
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 a dramatic rise can be observed from 1922 to 1970, around the railway.
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, other
population
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 areas appeared around the motorway, especially near the main road and railway crossings.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, side with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • village
  • population
  • increased steadily
  • middle of the nineteenth century
  • development
  • location
  • factors
  • contributing
  • physical
  • infrastructural
  • effects
  • conclusion
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