The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities
The bar chart compares the percentage of residents'
coffee
and tea purchasing and consuming in last
four weeks in five different areas of Australia's
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the last
Overall
, in
Adelaide had a less common in three categories. Change preposition
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While
,
in two regions Remove the comma
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wich
is Melbourne and Hobart were the highest Correct your spelling
which
percent
of visitation for people.
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per cent
It is clear that
, in Brisbane and Adelaide was
the lowest percentage of people buying fresh Unnecessary verb
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coffee
both at approximately 33%. The highest proportion of visiting a cafe for tea or coffee
was in Melbourne and Hobart, both accounting for nearly 63%.
Followed by Sydney at around 61%. Moreover
, in
Adelaide was the only city where the proportion of buying instant Change preposition
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coffee
surpassed fresh coffee
, with the former 50
% and the latter at nearly 48%.Change preposition
at 50
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