The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon.
The diagrams illustrate the stages in
life
of one of the big fishes, the salmon.
The cycle begins when adults lay the eggs between the small stones among the reeds in the upper Add an article
the life
river
, where the movement is slow. It took 5 to 6 months for the eggs to become a fry. The fires change the location to fast flowing
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fast-flowing
river
and stay at the lower river
for the next 4 years
, until they grow up to smolts. The smolts are three times bigger than the fries and their length varies from 12 to 15 sm.
After 4 years
, smolts move to the open sea, where, during the next 5 years
they grow up into adult salmons. The mature fish can achieve 70-76 cm length, which is ten times more, compared to fry. Interestingly, for breeding the adult salmon should come back to the river
, where the cycle starts from the beginning.
Overall
, it takes almost ten years
for salmon to breed, while
almost half of the time they live in the river
and half in the sea. In addition
, during the life cycle, the fish changes the environment three times and increases their length significantly from stage to stage.Submitted by vikiregev on
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