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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
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The pie charts illustrate the
percentage
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 of
water
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 used for different purposes in six areas of the world. The main categories of
water
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usage
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 are industrial, agricultural, and domestic.
Overall
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, the charts show that
water
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usage
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 varies significantly from region to region, with different areas having different priorities for
water
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 use. In terms of industrial
water
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usage
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, North
America
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 has the highest
percentage
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 at 48%,
while
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Africa
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 has the lowest at 9%. For agricultural
water
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usage
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, South
America
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 has the highest
percentage
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 at 71%,
while
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Europe
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 has the lowest at 12%. When it comes to domestic
water
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usage
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,
Africa
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 has the highest
percentage
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 at 84%,
while
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 South
America
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 has the lowest at 7%. Looking more closely at agricultural
water
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usage
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,
Africa
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, Central
Asia
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, and Southeast
Asia
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 rely heavily on
this
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 sector, with percentages just over four-fifths.
This
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 is approximately 40% higher than the
percentage
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 of agricultural
water
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usage
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 in North
America
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, 30% higher than in South
America
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, and 40% higher than in
Europe
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.
On the other hand
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, industrial
water
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usage
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 is highest in North
America
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 and
Europe
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,
while
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 South
America
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, Central
Asia
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, and
Africa
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 have lower percentages. When it comes to domestic
water
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usage
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, North
America
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,
Europe
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, and Southeast
Asia
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 have the lowest percentages at 13%, 15%, and 17% respectively. South
America
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 has a relatively higher
percentage
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 of 23%, which is twice as much as
Africa
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's
percentage
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 of 9% and 2% higher than Central
Asia
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's
percentage
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 of 7%.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 90%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, water, usage, america, africa, europe, asia with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 11 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • irrigation
  • domestic
  • industrial
  • regional disparity
  • economic structure
  • sustainable management
  • water-scarce
  • population density
  • urbanization
  • data trends
  • resource allocation
  • percentage distribution
  • extremes
  • variations
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