Most Countries allow 18 year olds to start driving a car. Some say it is good to allow it at this age, while others think that the age to start driving should be at least 25. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Most countries allow
people
at least 18
years
old to start driving a
car
,
however
, some
people
say that it is good for them to learn at
this
age
while
others say should be at least 25.
Therefore
, in
this
passage, I will provide my opinion about those points of view and give my opinion about it.
Firstly
, The advantage of allowing
people
can drive their own
car
for at least 18
years
is that
people
still have time to practice their driving skills if compared to
people
who are 25
years
old.
People
who already be 25
years
old have many things to do,
such
as working,
thus
,
that is
one of the reasons why
people
who can start driving at 18
years
old have benefits compared who can start driving at 25
years
old.
Secondly
, driving a
car
is a skill to takes time to master,
thus
, if the country allows
people
to start driving a
car
after 18
years
old, they have more time to practice their skills.
However
, allowing to drive a
car
at 18
years
old
also
has disadvantages.
Firstly
, how
people
will buy their own
car
at 18
years
old without the support of their family because it is very hard for them to buy a
car
with their own money.
Therefore
, purchasing their own vehicle without their parent's support is so hardly impossible.
Moreover
, driving a vehicle at 18
years
old will
also
get other
people
in trouble because if the driver is not mature in their thinking and if an accident occurs who will be responsible for the cost or the victim's life? Summarily, I believe that both requirements for driving a
car
have benefits and losses.
Nevertheless
, I strongly disagree with both points, I believe that driving a
car
should consider a lot of factors not only age, and should be at least 20-year-olds
instead
of 18 and 25-year-olds.
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You provided a clear introduction that outlined the topic and your intention to discuss both viewpoints.
coherence cohesion
The essay includes a conclusion that summarizes your perspective and presents your stance on the issue.

Include an introduction and conclusion

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • independence
  • responsibility
  • maturity
  • reckless behavior
  • statistically safer
  • accident rates
  • insurance costs
  • development of driving skills
  • inconvenience
  • public transportation
  • necessity
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