The line charts illustrate how much the possession of electrical appliances

The line charts illustrate how much the possession of electrical appliances
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The line charts illustrate how much the possession of electrical appliances
The multiple line chart illustrates how much electrical appliances changed within 100 years within households in one country The electrical appliances include the washing machine, refrigerator, and vacuum cleaner. In every house, they have use washing machine the majority of electrical objects are refrigerators, which start nearly 0 and in 1920 to 90 in 1960 and went up slightly to 100 per year in 1980.
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the majority of electrical objects are refrigerators, which significantly
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from nearly 0 per beginning in 1920 to 90 per starting in 1960, and went up slightly to 100 per year in 1980.
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, the rest of the lines were at the same proportions (70%).
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the refrigerator and vacuum cleaner continued to grow in the following years, the washing machine dropped to 63%.
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, it back to 70% two years later.
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chart shows a positive trend within electric equipment in the country household. In the second chart, the time citizens in
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country spent on housework experienced a drop from 50 per cent to 10 per cent consistently.

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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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