The graph shows the number of people taking part in 4 kinds of sports in a particular region between 1985 and 2005.. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given line graph illustrates the rate of individuals participating in 4 different sports in a particular region within a
period
of 20 years, commencing from 1985.
Overall
, the highest rate of people interested in Rugby in 1985
while
the opposite can be observed for
Badminton
in 1990. At the beginning of the
period
, rugby had the highest rate of people who attended
in
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this
sport just under 250.
This
figure decreased moderately until 1995 to get to 200. After that declined sharply to finish around 50 in 2005. more
players
in tennis was significantly greater than that of the two categories of Basketball and
Badminton
.
moreover
,
badminton
players
started with the lowest number of people than the other categories and remained stable over the
period
till 2005 when it reached 50 same as
,
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it was at the beginning of the
period
. The more noticeable feature is that Basketball
players
were started over 70 and kept the same trend as
badminton
players
to finish.
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