You recently noticed a local restaurant that was offering a part-time job. Write a letter to the restaurant's manager. In your letter, explain that you would like to apply for the job give some details of any relevant experience that you have specify the days and times that would suit you

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Dear Mr.Blue, I am writing

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letter to you because I heard somewhere that you are hiring.

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, I am a student and I am doing a crash course which takes 4 hours every day, after attending class I am totally free. So, I am looking for

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vacancy.

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, since childhood, I used to try new recipes at home, and my family and friends give me a lot of compliments because I make delicious food.

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, 2 years ago I worked in a cafe. So, I have one year's experience in making Chinese dishes

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as noodles, fried rice and so on. My speed in cooking is very good and

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I know chopping.

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, I have classes on 3 days a week, on Tuesday, Wednesday and Friday from 9:00am to 3:00pm, the rest of the time I am free. So, if I get a job for 4 days in the evenings 6pm to 10pm, I give my best to you. I'd be grateful to hear from you. Thanks in advance, yours sincerely, Red.

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coherence cohesion

Ensure each paragraph focuses on one main idea to improve structure.

task achievement

To enhance task achievement, provide a specific position you're applying for at the restaurant.

task achievement

You maintained courteous language throughout the letter, which is appropriate for task achievement.

coherence cohesion

The letter follows a logical order: introduction, experience, availability, and closing.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

176 words

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