The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
These diagrams present before and after versions of the
island
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development.
Overall
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, before the construction of facilities, the
island
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was uninhabited. After the establishment of facilities, the
island
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was turned into a vacation
island
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for tourists. Interestingly, the location of the coconut trees and the beach has remained the same . Before the construction began, the
island
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was benign. There were only a handful of coconut trees scattered around the west and east sides of the
island
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.
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, there was a beach on the western coast of the
island
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.
However
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, after the construction, the
island
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had begun
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began
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to change. After the transformation, the
island
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turned into a
tourist'
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tourist
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paradise. At the centre of the
island
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, there is now a reception, with a vehicle track connecting the building to the restaurant at the north, and a pier at the south.
Moreover
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, there is new accommodation for the tourists situated beside the reception, both linked together by a footpath.
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, the features of the
island
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remained the same, with the beach turning into a swimming area.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words island with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • island
  • before and after
  • construction
  • tourist facilities
  • maps
  • changes
  • comparison
  • description
  • implications
  • personal opinion
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