The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.
The diagram illustrates the instant noodles production process, which is linear and includes eight stages.
For the production water, oil, flour, vegetables and spices are needed.
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, cups and labels are used for packaging.
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First,
the flour by truck is delivered to the storage silos. Linking Words
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, the flour, water and oil are put into the mixer and manufacturing begins. From the mixer, the raw mass is converted to dough sheets by passing through rollers. During the next Linking Words
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, sheets are cut into dough strips, from which noodled discs are created. After that, the discs are cooked in oil and dried.
When the noodles are ready, they are packed in cups. At Use synonyms
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, vegetables and spices are added. The Use synonyms
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is sealing and labelling the cups.
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Overall
, the process of instant noodles production is fully automatic and driven by a conveyor from the Linking Words
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of dough to the final package.Use synonyms
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