The table below shows the consumer durables (telephone, refrigerator, etc.) owned in Britain from 1972 to 1983. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The table below shows the consumer durables (telephone, refrigerator, etc.) owned in Britain from 1972 to

1983.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The given table compares the percentage of British households which owned a range of consumer durables between 1972 and 1983.
Overall
, it can be seen that the ratio of British families owning those household durables steadily increased during the 11-
year
span. Other than that the most common electronic item was television,
whereas
the least common was dishwasher.
To begin
with, as the data shown in the table, TVs and vacuum cleaners were highly popular amongst citizens in 1972, with 93% and 87% respectively. There were minor variations in the ownership of TV from 1972 to 1983.
In other words
, it had increased by only 5% during the given period.
In contrast
, the major growth was related to telephone, which was 42% in the initial
year
and
then
climbed noticeably to reach 77% in the
last
year
.
Moreover
, there are some items that appeared in British accommodation during these ages and others that disappeared. It is immediately obvious that 1978 was the
year
of the introduction of dishwashers and only a tiny minority of people owned
this
device.
also
, before 1983, none of them had possession of a video player.
On the contrary
,
this
year
, people stopped using vacuum cleaners and no statistics have been reported.
Submitted by Nastaran_zandy on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Consumer durables
  • Annual trends
  • Ownership percentage
  • Notable increases/decreases
  • Milestones
  • Initial/final ownership
  • Comparative analysis
  • Significant changes
  • Overall trend
  • Shifts in ownership
  • Patterns in data
  • Year-on-year analysis
  • Implications
  • Data highlights
What to do next:
Look at other essays: