The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given map demonstrates the changes
happened
to the Correct pronoun usage
that happened
road
which had an
access to the Remove the article
apply
city
hospital in 2007 and in 2010.
Overall
, the significant change was the transportation system. In addition
, the roundabouts are located on the hospital road
that had been constructed along with
bus stations and car parks.
First of all, in 2007 the hospital road
was only connecting the city
road
with the city
hospital. However
, in 2010 not only there was a roundabout in the north of the hospital road
but also
in its south part which connected it with the newly built bus station, furthermore
, the south roundabout connected the city
road
with the bus station .
Secondly
, the car park included both the staff and public cars in 2007. As a result
of that a new public car was built attached to the ring road
and the original was now becoming exclusively for the staff only. In the east, meanwhile, there was a newly constructed roundabout.Submitted by besoyam on
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