The maps below show the redevelopment of a seaside village between 1995 and present

Contained in the two maps is information pertaining to changes with have taken place in the seaside

village

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from 1995 to the present.

Overall

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, with the exception of the cafe and hotel, the seaside

village

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design

had

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has

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undergone

dramatically

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dramatic

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changes for a long time. Beginning with the north-west of the

village

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, the shop has been demolished, they were replaced with a newly constructed restaurant.

This

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fish market which is in front of the shop has been converted into 4 apartments in

this

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place.

Futhermore

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Furthermore

, in the sea, the rising port has

been vanished

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vanished

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that

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apply

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can be expanded

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to more

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space in the east of

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village

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the village

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. The hotel in the south-east of

this

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place has

been

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apply

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remained stable for a long time,

along with

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Correct article usage

the

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addition of

area

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an area

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designated for people can park their vehicles to the east of

hotel

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the hotel

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. Moving onto the north-east of the seaside

village

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, where the farmland and the forest had been in 1995, there was a large area which included golf and tennis for people to play.

In addition

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, some houses in the north-east of the map,

it has

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have

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been constructed two new houses and the road has been expanded to the west to connect lots of houses in the housing

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The maps below show the redevelopment of a seaside village between 1995 and present

In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Several languages are in danger of extinction because they are spoken by a very small number of people. People say that govt should spend public money on saving these languages. Discuss both views and give ur opinion.

plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad fo the envionment. what damage does plastic do to the environment? what can be done by goverment and indidviduals to solve this problem?

Some people say that in the modern world, getting old is entirely bad. Others, however, say that life for the elderly nowadays is much better than it was in the past. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.