You have just received an invitation to an art exhibition. You would like more details about the event before you decide to go. Write a letter to the organiser asking for more details. In your letter • thank them for the invitation • ask what kind of art will be on display and the size of each section • ask if any of the artists will be present

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Dear Mr. Dilian and the organization board of

Baroque

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the Baroque

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Art

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exhibition

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Exhibition

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, Thank you for inviting me to the exhibition on August 2024. It is my pleasure to attend on the opening day. As a final year student of Architecture University, I am

passinated

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passionate

passionated

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about

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art

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, especially European

art

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Therefore

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this

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exhibition will be a great opportunity for me to study about famous Baroque style that was influent the whole European

art

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17th

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the 17th

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century.

Additional

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Additionally

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, I would like to ask for more detail about how many themes will be displayed,

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also

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as well as

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the size of each section. It

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would be

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wonderful if you would attach me leaflet

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for

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this

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event. The

last

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thing, I heard from

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the TV

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news

that

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is that

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Mrs.

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Mrs

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Alice Smith - the Professor from ACB Collegue and some artists will attend

for

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apply

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talkshow

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talk show

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. Please let me know the which date of the

exhitibion

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exhibition

that those famous artists will come, I am so excited to ask them for a signature. Looking forward

hearing

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to hearing

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from you. Best regards, Cassy Nguyen

minhchau8487Thu Jun 13 2024

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coherence cohesion

You could improve the logical structure by organizing the questions more clearly, for instance, by putting them in separate paragraphs or using bullet points.

task achievement

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suitable writing tone

Your letter is polite and shows enthusiasm for the event, which makes it engaging to read.

task achievement

You maintained a formal tone and included all required parts of the task, such as thanking them for the invitation, asking relevant questions, and closing appropriately.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

169 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

invitation
art exhibition
organizer
details
display
paintings
sculptures
mixed media
section
gallery
present
artists
interactions
autographs

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