You have just received an invitation to an art exhibition. You would like more details about the event before you decide to go. Write a letter to the organiser asking for more details. In your letter • thank them for the invitation • ask what kind of art will be on display and the size of each section • ask if any of the artists will be present
Dear Mr. Dilian and the organization board of
Baroque
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the Baroque
Art
exhibition
,
Thank you for inviting me to the exhibition on August 2024. It is my pleasure to attend on the opening day.
As a final year student of Architecture University, I am Capitalize word
Exhibition
passinated
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passionate
passionated
in
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about
art
, especially European art
. Therefore
, this
exhibition will be a great opportunity for me to study about famous Baroque style that was influent the whole European art
in 17th
century.
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the 17th
Additional
, I would like to ask for more detail about how many themes will be displayed, Change the word
Additionally
also
the size of each section. It Rephrase
as well as
is
wonderful if you would attach me leaflet Wrong verb form
would be
of
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for
this
event.
The last
thing, I heard from TV
news Correct article usage
the TV
that
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is that
Mrs.
Alice Smith - the Professor from ACB Collegue and some artists will attend Change the punctuation
Mrs
for
a Change preposition
apply
talkshow
. Please let me know the which date of the Correct your spelling
talk show
exhitibion
that those famous artists will come, I am so excited to ask them for a signature.
Looking forward Correct your spelling
exhibition
hearing
from you.
Best regards,
Cassy NguyenChange preposition
to hearing
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suitable writing tone
Your letter is polite and shows enthusiasm for the event, which makes it engaging to read.
task achievement
You maintained a formal tone and included all required parts of the task, such as thanking them for the invitation, asking relevant questions, and closing appropriately.