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The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world.

The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world.
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The chart
figures
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shows
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 the forest area in millions of
hectares
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 in six distinct parts of the world including Africa, Asia,
Europe
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, North
America
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,
Oceania
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, and South
America
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 in 1990, 2000, and 2005.
Overall
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,
Europe
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 emerged as the biggest forest area throughout the given period,
whereas
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Oceania
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 as the least surface with forest.
Europe
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 and Asia appeared with an increasing trend of forested
land
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,
while
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 others witnessed the opposite. It can be seen from the table that, forested
land
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 in
Europe
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figured
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reached
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 989
million
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hectares
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 in 1990, which increased continuously by years to 1001
million
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hectares
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 in 2005, dominating the forested
land
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 counts among other parts of the world. With 946
million
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hectares
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 in 1990, South
America
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 emerged as the second biggest count of forested
land
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 but consistently dropped to 882
million
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hectares
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 in 2005. Africa, North
America
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, and
Oceania
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also
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 experienced a downward trend from the beginning to the end of the time given, Africa with 749 dropped to 691
million
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hectares
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, North
America
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 from 708 to 705
million
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hectares
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, and
Oceania
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 from 199 to 197
million
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hectares
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.
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, Asia experienced an upward trend of forested
land
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 counts with 576 to millions of
hectares
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 in 1990, which increased to 584
million
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hectares
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 in 2005.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words hectares, europe, america, oceania, land, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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