Some people believe that children should be banned from using their phones during the school day. Others believe that children should be allowed to use their phones. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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are not allowed to be used by

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during the

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day

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but others believe the opposite. Gadgets during the

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day

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can distract

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from studying, but

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,

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can be helpful for them to

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with many advanced features. I believe the

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of gadgets by

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school

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should be

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as long as parental control exists.

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, the idea of prohibiting

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from using

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days is because it can distract them from studying or doing their homework. It has been a concern for people that excessive usage of

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by the young generation can be harmful. There is evidence that games and social media

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, which are featured on

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, can influence

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to excessive phone usage and lead them to neglect the value of

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.

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, the

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of

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can be helpful for

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to

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with features in it. The access to the internet and some applications in current

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with high technology is considered helpful for

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to

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.

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can access any source of information required with an internet connection and there are a lot of applications available that can help

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study

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such

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as the Ruang Guru application that consists of learning material which accessible easily or even a translation application.

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, I believe that the

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of

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can be a good development for

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to help them

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during the

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with parental supervision.

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should control the

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of

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by their

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, in terms of purpose limitation and time limitation.

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,

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should be advised and supervised that

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can be used during the

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day

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only for

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purposes and limit them to a particular time to prevent them from excessive

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. In conclusion, the debate

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children

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should be allowed to

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phones

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during the

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day

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or not

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in society. But I personally believe, with parental supervision, the

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of

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can be an advantage in helping

children

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study

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.