You are part of a group of musicians who meet on Tuesday and Friday evenings to practise in the community hall. You have been told, however, that it is no longer possible for the group to use the hall. Write a letter to the manager. In the letter: describe what the group does explain why the group is good for the community suggest alternative days and times for practice
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Dear Sir,
I am writing
this
letter to request you for using
the Change preposition
to use
community
hall. My name is Harry and I am the one of musicians in our group, who are playing Correct article usage
the violine
violine
in the local Correct your spelling
violin
community
center
.
Change the spelling
centre
Initially
, our group contains
twelve members and we Wrong verb form
contained
are
all practising Verb problem
have
violene
in Correct your spelling
violence
this
community
center since
two years. Normally our practice Change preposition
for
timing
is 6.00 PM to 8.0PM on every Replace the word
time
tuesday
and Change the capitalization
Tuesday
friday
. Change the capitalization
Friday
Last
week one of your community
service staff told us there is no class
to conduct from next week onwards,
because some NGO has planned to organize Remove the comma
apply
dance
programme Correct article usage
a dance
in
that same date and timing our musical Change preposition
on
class
schedule.
To
addition, as a Change preposition
In
manager
you know about our team. We are all conducting free Add a comma
manager,
class
for physically handicapped artists and Fix the agreement mistake
classes
provinding
Correct your spelling
providing
lot
of funds to the organization. Correct article usage
a lot
Hence
, kindly consider our request and make some alternative arrangement
for us. If Fix the agreement mistake
arrangements
no
possible, we can change our Correct your spelling
not
class
schedule and time depends
on your decision.
Yours Wrong verb form
depending
truley
,
HarryCorrect your spelling
truly
..
JamesReplace the punctuation
.
...
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task achievement
Make sure your response completely addresses all parts of the prompt. You covered the main points but more details could be added on why the group is beneficial for the community.
coherence cohesion
Improve the logical structure of your letter by clearly organizing paragraphs and ensuring smooth transitions.
coherence cohesion
Each paragraph should ideally contain a single idea to make it easier to read and understand.
task achievement
The letter maintains a polite and respectful tone throughout, which is appropriate for this context.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are correctly formatted and contribute to the overall clarity of the letter.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,