The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph depicts the trends in recycling of four materials over a span of almost two decades, from 1982-2010.
Firstly
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, the only items that were recycled in 1982 were
paper
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and
cardboard
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as well as
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glass
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containers.
Paper
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products took the lead with a rate of approximately 65%. Both of them fluctuated over time until 1994 when the rates rose to 80% and 50% for
cardboard
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and
glass
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respectively. There was an addition of aluminium cans being recycled from 1986 with plastics joining shortly after in 1990,
however
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, these were very rare.
Furthermore
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, from 1994 onwards, the trends for
glass
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, aluminium and plastics increased,
whereas
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the rate for
paper
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and
cardboard
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decreased. Despite
this
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,
paper
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products were still the most recycled articles between 70-80%
whereas
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plastics were the least, at less than 10%.
Overall
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, the amount of recycling of all types of recyclable products increased over the course of the study.
Additionally
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,
cardboard
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and
glass
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were recycled longer than aluminium and plastic.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
Vocabulary: Replace the words paper, cardboard, glass with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • recycled
  • materials
  • increased
  • paper and cardboard
  • plastic
  • glass
  • metal
  • significant increase
  • relatively stable
  • fluctuating
  • period
  • starting
  • reaching
  • gradually increasing
  • remained low
  • experienced
  • showed
  • greatest
  • proportion
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