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The flow chart provides key information about the production process of making

sugar

from

sugar

cane.

Overall

, it is clear from the graph that the processing journey is a complex, multi-stage,

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loop, starting with growing the

sugar

cane, and ending with drying and cooling.

In addition

, the first steps focus on planting and harvesting,

whereas

the latter stages involve the transformation into new material.

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caring

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of planets and collecting them either by people or by

plowing

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. After that, the

sugar

cane is crushed by some machine to produce the juice which is needed for

purifying

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by

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filter. In

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of

further

processing, the liquid is evaporated by fire to become a syrup. After evaporating, the syrup

centrifuged

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to separate

sugar

crystals.

Finally

, following the centrifuge phase, they dry and cool these particles until create clear

sugar

ready to use.