The housing shortage today in big cities can have severe social consequences. Many people think that only government actions can solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Nowadays many
industries
and companies are establishing in urban
areas
so many
people
are shifting to there from their hometown for job finding.
This
can create accommodation scarcity and
huge
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impact
in
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social life. Most of the aspirants
are thinking
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government
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the government
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should interfere and fix
this
issue. I fully support
this
statement by giving the
below mentioned
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points.
Firstly
, nowadays most
of
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the
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industries
and software companies are focusing
to locate
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on locating
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their main and branch offices in the
city
.
Because if
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the
industries
should
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be placed in the
city
the amenities like goods transportation, electrical
source
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sources
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and manpower are easily available.
Thus
, many
people
especially youngsters who are finding
job
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a job
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after
the
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academic completion
is
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migrating to
city
areas
from their native place.
This
can create
the
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space crisis in urban dwelling
areas
.
Secondly
,
thus
the ascension of
industrial
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the industrial
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revolution in urban
areas
.
People
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accommodation crisis will rapidly increase.
This
can create more consequences in the society for
future
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the future
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.
For
instance
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most
of
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apply
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people
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the people
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are using private vehicles
this
will generate
the
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traffic
problem
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problems
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and air pollution.
Also
, the land rate and rental
cost
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costs
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will be increasing frequently the middle class and poor
people
will suffer to survive their life in
city
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the city
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.
To sum up
,
government
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the government
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has the ultimate authority to reduce the accommodation shortage in urban
area
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areas
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. All politicians and
government
officials should work with
team
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a team
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sprit
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spirit
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to shift the
industries
and companies from the
city
Centre.
Moreover
,
government
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the government
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will
endeavor
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to establish the upcoming
industries
in
to
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near rural
areas
by creating a smart
city
.
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