You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. The chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household.
The first pie chart illustrates the use of power for household purposes in
Australia
and the second pie chart displays how many greenhouse
gas
emissions
from the usage of
this
power.
Overall
, heating and
water
heating are the main purposes of energy use in
Australia
. It can
also
be seen that
water
heating and other appliances contribute the most to
Australia
's
gas
emissions
. The main reason Australians use the power is for heating, with 42%, followed by
water
heating, at 30%. Other appliances take part in 15% of the usage purpose. The other three reasons, which are refrigeration, lighting, and cooling, have less than a tenth for each, with 7%, 4%, and 2%, respectively.
This
energy left an effect
of
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greenhouse
gas
emissions
in
Australia
, in which
water
heating is the main cause of the emission and contributes to 32% of the total causes. The second main cause is other appliances, which gives 28%. Heating and refrigeration contribute 15% and 14% of
gas
emissions
, respectively. Lighting gives 8% to the total emission,
while
cooling only contributes 3%.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words australia, gas, emissions, water with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gives" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • energy consumption
  • household
  • heating
  • water heating
  • total energy use
  • household appliances
  • refrigerator
  • washing machine
  • lighting
  • cooling
  • miscellaneous energy uses
  • average household
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