Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Establishing
new
business should be accompanied by the most Correct article usage
a new
commen
ways of advertising to ensure the Correct your spelling
common
success
of this
project. In this
regard, it is proposed that expanding ways of advertisement for the sake of convincing people
to accept your product
and feel comfortable to buy and use it, although
many disagree and contend that this
method is useless and doesn’t convince customers. In my opinion, advertising is the most effective way to make your product
well-known and best-seller; however
, this
essay will explore both aspects of this
discussion.
There are several reasons why some people
don’t believe in marketing. First,
they suppose if the customer needs any type of product
, they will search everywhere until they find what they want. Second,
as long as you have a shop online or at
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on
street
you must choose Add an article
the street
vital
place, you will achieve Add an article
the vital
a vital
good
income Correct article usage
a good
at the end
of every month and your project will succeed. Finally
, when customers come to your shop and you welcome them and have a very nice way of dealing with them, they will come again and again and tell other people
about your fancy place and products.
Despite the above arguments, I believe that advertising is a stunning way of
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to
success
Replace the word
succeed
of
any Change preposition
in
new
launched project by choosing the right methods that attract clients to your shop or products. Change the adjective
newly
Besides
being confident of your product
’s quality, your advertising will last
for years and your
will achieve big Change the pronoun
you
success
. Nowadays new AI technology makes different types of marketing by videos, designs and motion techniques. By advertising, not only you can convince ordinary people
but also
you can reach people
who are really interested in your product
anywhere in our
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the
worldwide
whether Replace the word
world
if
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apply
this
customer in
your country or outside. Add a missing verb
is in
For example
, if you have a medical equipment company, you will reach doctors, clinics and big medical centers
easily by targeting Change the spelling
centres
this
type of people
on facebook
or other websites.
In conclusion, there are good reasons why some Capitalize word
Facebook
people
don’t believe in marketing, but in my opinion
advertising is much more beneficial and we should make use of new technologies in our business to achieve great Add a comma
opinion,
success
in a short time.Submitted by Mido on
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coherence cohesion
Your essay provides a clear introduction and conclusion, maintaining a logical structure throughout. However, make sure your transitions between ideas are smoother to increase coherence.
task achievement
Although you respond to the task prompt effectively, elaborate further on your points. Providing specific, detailed examples can better illustrate your arguments.
task achievement
Try to make your arguments clearer by avoiding redundant phrases and focusing on precise language. This will help you express your comprehensive ideas more effectively.
task achievement
Your essay presents a balanced discussion of both perspectives and offers a clear opinion.
coherence cohesion
The introduction clearly states the topic and the conclusion effectively summarizes your main points.
task achievement
You provide relevant examples, such as the use of AI in advertising, to support your claims.
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.
Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.
When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.
Linking words for giving examples:
- for example
- for instance
- to illustrate this
- to give a clear example
- such as
- namely
- to illustrate
- take, for example
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