The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph gives information about 3 types of
food
which Australian teenagers consumed between 1975 to 2000. Looking at the
overall
trend,
it is clear that
fish
and
chips
declined over time
while
pizza
and
hamburgers
were eaten increased.
To begin
with that, in 1975
fish
and
chips
were at the top of the consumed
food
100
times
eaten
whereas
pizza
and
hamburgers
starts
Wrong verb form
started
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to appear. Next decade in 1985
hamburgers
was equaled amount with
food
fish
and
chips
which consumed approximately 85
times
in the
year
.
In addition
.
pizza
began to grow and was eaten 30
times
. In 1995, the number of eaten
hamburgers
was at the top of the list a little more than 100
times
per
a
Correct article usage
apply
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year
, at the same time
pizza
was probably 85
times
per
year
.
However
,
food
which was popular in 1975, dropped and stayed at
last
on the list in 1995 with 50
times
eaten by teenagers and still falls. In 2000, the amount of fast
food
consumed by teenagers has not changed, but
fish
and
chips
has
Change the verb form
have
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reached no more than 40
times
per
year
,
while
others averaged 90-92
times
per
year
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words food, fish, chips, pizza, hamburgers, times, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • line graph
  • trends
  • consumption
  • type of fast food
  • popularity
  • peaked
  • hit a low
  • timeline
  • notable
  • switch
  • cultural trends
  • economic factors
  • marketing efforts
  • increase
  • decrease
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