Two maps below show the site of a college in 2006 and the present day.

Two maps below show the site of a college in 2006 and the present day.
The given maps illustrate the developments that took place at Lynwich College from 2006 to the present day.
Overall
, a comparison of the two maps reveals a complete transformation from a largely rural to a well-developed environment. In 2006, the college was much greener, with a large number of trees.
However
, in the past years, the
campus
has seen significant changes. The most noticeable is that most of the trees in the north of the
campus
were chopped down to make way for new pathways for students.
Moreover
, in the east of the
campus
, a large car park was divided to create a bike storage area.
Similarly
, in the southeast, the library was demolished to make space for a sports centre.
As a result
, the sports field became smaller compared to the past.
In contrast
, in the south of the
campus
, the woodland was cleared and converted into a new library.
Further
developments included the construction of a cafeteria in the centre of the
campus
, with pathways leading to other sections.
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