The bar chart below shows the average duration of housework women did (unemployed, part-time employed, and full-time) when compared to men who had full-time work in the Peru between 1985 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given chart compares the duration of average
hours
of household work between women
and men in the
Peru in a time span of 20 years from 1985 to 2005. Correct article usage
apply
Overall
, it is evident that unemployed women
did the most of
work and men did the least work in a given time frame.
In 1985, Unemployed Change preposition
apply
women
worked for 7 hours
everyday
; Replace the word
every day
wherears
, in 1995 Correct your spelling
whereas
there
Replace the word
their
hours
decreased a bit and were at around 6.5 hours
. Moreover
, in 2005 there
Replace the word
their
hours
went back to 7 again. However
, women
working part-time were doing just above 5 hours
each day in 1985, which was
declined to 5 Unnecessary verb
apply
hours
in 1995 before reaching to
6 Change preposition
apply
hours
in 2005.
In contrast
, the average hours
of women
who were working full-time in 1985 was very less
and was only 2 Correct word choice
little
hours
, but then
it increased in 2005 to just under 3 hours
. In addition
, men's
employed full-time Change noun form
men
had
worked 1 hour in both 1985 and 1995; Unnecessary verb
apply
whereas
, hours
increased slightly to approximately 1.5 hours
in 2005.Submitted by harleenarora620 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, women with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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