The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles?
The diagram clearly depicts how
plastic
bottles
are recycled. As illustrated, there are nine stages involved in order to recycle plastic
bottles
.
According to
the diagram, first,
the process commences with throwing this
type of bottles
into the special bins that are located in different places all over the city. After that, specific trucks collect these Fix the agreement mistake
bottle
bottles
from the bins and they
take Correct pronoun usage
apply
it
to the recycling Correct pronoun usage
them
center
. Change the spelling
centre
Next,
the workers of this
centre sort these bottles
and then
they compress it
into blocks. These blocks Correct pronoun usage
them
then
become crushed by going through a sharp machine. The diagram shows further
stage in which these crushed plastics, Add an article
a further
the further
they
become washed in Correct pronoun usage
apply
a
water and after that they go into another machine which produces Remove the article
apply
plastic
pellets. Finally
, they heat this
pellets and after heating, they become raw material which Correct determiner usage
these
this
centre convert
Correct subject-verb agreement
converts
it
Correct pronoun usage
apply
to
various goods Change preposition
into
such
as clothes, bags, and again new plastic
bottles
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