The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles?

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles?
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The diagram clearly depicts how
plastic
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bottles
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are recycled. As illustrated, there are nine stages involved in order to recycle
plastic
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bottles
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.
According to
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the diagram,
first,
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the process commences with throwing
this
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type of
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bottles
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bottle
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into the special bins that are located in different places all over the city. After that, specific trucks collect these
bottles
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from the bins and
they
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apply
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take
it
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them
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to the recycling
center
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centre
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.
Next,
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the workers of
this
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centre sort these
bottles
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and
then
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they compress
it
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them
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into blocks. These blocks
then
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become crushed by going through a sharp machine. The diagram shows
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further
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stage in which these crushed plastics,
they
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apply
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become washed in
a
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water and after that they go into another machine which produces
plastic
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pellets.
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, they heat
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this
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these
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pellets and after heating, they become raw material which
this
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centre
convert
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converts
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it
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apply
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to
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into
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various goods
such
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as clothes, bags, and again new
plastic
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bottles
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.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic, bottles with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • recycling
  • mitigate
  • environmental impact
  • landfills
  • conservation
  • sorted
  • residual waste
  • adhesives
  • shredded
  • pellets
  • manufacturing
  • ecological
  • economical
  • sustainable
  • automation
  • raw material
  • life cycle
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