The chart below gives information about how people aged 25-34 are housed in the UK. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting on the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart shows data about how
avarage
people from 25 to 34 years old are housed in the UK. Correct your spelling
average
According to
the chart, percentages
of homeowners tend to fall after each year
, while
the number of renters slowly increase
.
In 2004, the amount of homeowners Correct subject-verb agreement
increases
take
up to almost 60% Verb problem
was
as
the highest rate and in 2014, it Change preposition
at
drop
to about 35%. Wrong verb form
dropped
Year
2005 to 2007 holds
Correct subject-verb agreement
hold
a
steady Correct article usage
apply
percentages
at about 55% of homeowners throughout Correct the article-noun agreement
percentage
UK
Correct article usage
the UK
then
the percentages
consistently fall and Fix the agreement mistake
percentage
fluctuates
between the Correct subject-verb agreement
fluctuate
year
2011 to 2013.
In comparison, Fix the agreement mistake
years
while
the amount of homeownership has
reached Unnecessary verb
apply
it’s
highest peak in 2004, Correct your spelling
its
Correct article usage
the percentages
percentages
of rental Fix the agreement mistake
percentage
property
was at Fix the agreement mistake
properties
it’s
lowest – at about 20%. Correct your spelling
its
Similar
Change the word
Similarly
to
Change preposition
apply
that
, in 2014, renter Correct pronoun usage
apply
citizen
Fix the agreement mistake
citizens
of
the UK Change preposition
in
has
went up to nearly 30%. From Unnecessary verb
apply
Change the article
the year
year
2003 to 2006 and between 2007 and 2008, there Fix the agreement mistake
years
were
little or almost no change in Correct subject-verb agreement
was
renter
population; other than that, the Correct article usage
the renter
percentages
for renters changes
a bit Wrong verb form
changed
through
each Change preposition
apply
year
but it
still stably Correct pronoun usage
they
rise
.Wrong verb form
rose
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
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