The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The line chart delineates the data on the total number of shops opened and closed in a particular country from the
year
2011 to the year
2018.
Overall
, the graph illustrates high variance throughout the given period. In the year
2015, the chart showed a dramatic drop. Nevertheless
, in 2013 it reached its peak.
To begin
with,In the year
2011, the number of shops opened was 8,500, it fell to half the amount in the following year
. It then
soared to 5,000 in 2013 and 6,000 in 2014 respectively. However
, it dropped to 4,000 in the next year
and levelled off for the next consecutive 2 years and by the end of 2018, it reached 3,000. On the other hand
, in the beginning of 2011, the total count of shops closed was 6,500 but it reduced to 6,000 in the year
2012, reaching the highest of 7000 in the year
2013. From 2014, the graph dropped to 6,000 and from there to 500. This
year
the country met with the lowest number of shop closures. Nonetheless
, the graph rose to 5000 and hovered for the next 3 years.Submitted by praneeth2094 on
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