You recently moved to a new house and you want to invite an old friend to stay with you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, -Invite him to stay and suggest a date -briefly describe the new house and garden -say why you like your new house.
Dear Amanda,
I hope
this
letter finds you in excellent health and you are doing well over there, for long
time no seen you since we finished our studies in senior high school 2 years ago, I really miss you, girl. I am writing Add an article
a long
this
email to inform you that I have recently move
to Change the verb form
moved
new
house, and Add an article
a new
the new
the
located near Correct pronoun usage
it the
from
your city.
First of all, I am going to describe my cottage to you. Change preposition
apply
This
place is great because have a
complete facilities Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
such
as big
garage, Add an article
a big
the big
stunning
view, and Correct article usage
a stunning
also
have swimming
pool in the backyard. Add an article
a swimming
Moreover
, there have
a good neighborhood.
Verb problem
is
In addition
, I love this
flat as
for several reasons. Change preposition
apply
Firstly
, it near
with a lot of public Add a missing verb
is near
fasilities
like a Mall, Correct your spelling
facilities
education
facility and Correct article usage
an education
have
Correct subject-verb agreement
has
delighful
transportation. Correct your spelling
delicious
Secondly
, cost
Correct article usage
the cost
live
here is really Correct word choice
of living
friendly
it is helpful for me as a young generation to Correct word choice
high
saving numerous
money.
Once again, If you have Wrong verb form
save
a
free time Correct determiner usage
some
in
Change preposition
apply
this
weekend I want to invite you come
to my house we will conduct a private party to celebrate Add the particle
to come
this
moment. I looking forward to hearing from you soon.
yours sincerely,
Bayu sab.Submitted by patricius.yohanes on
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coherence and cohesion
Try to maintain a clear logical flow in your letter. Ensure each paragraph transitions smoothly to the next. Each paragraph should contain a single main idea, and a logical order of ideas should be clear to the reader.
coherence and cohesion
Work on sentence structure and grammar to improve clarity and readability. Also, make sure there's consistency in verb tenses and subject-verb agreement.
task achievement
Ensure your response is more comprehensive and provides all necessary details. For example, the date for the invitation should be clearly stated.
task achievement
You have done a good job of addressing the points requested in the prompt, such as describing the new house and expressing your reasons for liking it.
coherence and cohesion
The greeting and closing are polite and friendly, which creates a warm tone suitable for the letter.
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