The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates how the society in one European nation consumed various types of meat between 1974 and 2004 in
grams
per person within a seven-day period. In general, the trend of people eating chicken rose,
while
other categories declined through 25 years. At the beginning of the time frame, the majority of people ate beef
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just above 0.20
kilograms
per person per week compared to lamb and chicken which hovered around 0.15
kilograms
.
Conversely
, only a mere person consumed roughly 60
grams
of fish within seven days in the middle of the 1970s. The weekly consumption of beef reached its peak at almost a quarter kilogram per individual in 1984,
then
started to decrease from a similar range by the end of the 1980s to about 125
grams
at the end
of the time frame.
Moreover
, the number of people eating lamb dropped moderately from exactly 150
grams
to approximately 75
grams
between two and a half decades,
as well as
fish which had a relatively slight reduction to just below 50
grams
in 2004.
In contrast
, the amount of personal intake of chicken gradually rose from just under 0.15
kilograms
per week in 1974 to just smaller than 0.25
kilograms
in 2004.
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  • consumption trends
  • steady increase
  • most consumed meat
  • relatively stable
  • general decline
  • pronounced decline
  • over the years
  • throughout the period
  • depicts
  • span
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