The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The illustration demonstrates the comparison of a central library’s floor from two decades before and at present. A few rearrangements of the sections have been done

along with

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the addition of a café.

Firstly

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, the library’s structure in the past had all the basic amenities of a library with six major areas and

the

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entrance from the south. On the north-east

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side

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side,

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there is a computer sector and a children’s section on the north-west end. Smack in the

center

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centre

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is the seating arrangement with adult fiction and non-fiction books on

its

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apply

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either

side

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. The south-east area has

reading

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a reading

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room and

south-west

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the south-west

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has the enquiry table.

Secondly

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, compared to the library’s floor arrangement 20 years back, at present the children’s area has been shifted to the north-east

side

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with

addition

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the addition

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of storytelling sessions and proper seating,

whereas

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the computer section has been moved to the south-east

side

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next to the entrance. A lecture room has been added on the

north-west

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northwest

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side

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, and the central seating has been removed with only reference books on one

side

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and the information desk on the other

side

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Furthermore

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, a café and

self service

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machines have been introduced.

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, to sum it up, the major changes made in the library in two decades are

addition

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the addition

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of a snack bar

along with

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much advanced

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much-advanced

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kid’s portion.

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of the segments

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are

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more or less the same with reorganization done.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "along with".

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words side with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

233 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

layout
modern technology
computer stations
multimedia room
multi-purpose spaces
conference rooms
study spaces
community-oriented services
accessibility
wider aisles
ramps
designated areas
people with disabilities
cafeteria
coffee shop
leisurely space

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The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change.