The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The illustration demonstrates the comparison of a central library’s floor from two decades before and at present. A few rearrangements of the sections have been done
along with
the addition of a café.
Firstly
, the library’s structure in the past had all the basic amenities of a library with six major areas and
the
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entrance from the south. On the north-east
side
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there is a computer sector and a children’s section on the north-west end. Smack in the
center
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is the seating arrangement with adult fiction and non-fiction books on
its
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either
side
. The south-east area has
reading
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room and
south-west
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has the enquiry table.
Secondly
, compared to the library’s floor arrangement 20 years back, at present the children’s area has been shifted to the north-east
side
with
addition
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of storytelling sessions and proper seating,
whereas
the computer section has been moved to the south-east
side
next to the entrance. A lecture room has been added on the
north-west
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side
, and the central seating has been removed with only reference books on one
side
and the information desk on the other
side
.
Furthermore
, a café and
self service
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machines have been introduced.
Finally
, to sum it up, the major changes made in the library in two decades are
addition
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of a snack bar
along with
a
much advanced
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kid’s portion.
Rest
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of the segments
is
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are
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more or less the same with reorganization done.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words side with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • layout
  • modern technology
  • computer stations
  • multimedia room
  • multi-purpose spaces
  • conference rooms
  • study spaces
  • community-oriented services
  • accessibility
  • wider aisles
  • ramps
  • designated areas
  • people with disabilities
  • cafeteria
  • coffee shop
  • leisurely space
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