The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The illustration demonstrates the comparison of a central library’s floor from two decades before and at present. A few rearrangements of the sections have been done
along with
the addition of a café.
Firstly
, the library’s structure in the past had all the basic amenities of a library with six major areas and the
entrance from the south. On the north-east Correct article usage
an
side
there is a computer sector and a children’s section on the north-west end. Smack in the Add a comma
side,
center
is the seating arrangement with adult fiction and non-fiction books on Change the spelling
centre
its
either Correct pronoun usage
apply
side
. The south-east area has reading
room and Add an article
a reading
south-west
has the enquiry table.
Correct article usage
the south-west
Secondly
, compared to the library’s floor arrangement 20 years back, at present the children’s area has been shifted to the north-east side
with addition
of storytelling sessions and proper seating, Add an article
the addition
whereas
the computer section has been moved to the south-east side
next to the entrance. A lecture room has been added on the north-west
Correct your spelling
northwest
side
, and the central seating has been removed with only reference books on one side
and the information desk on the other side
. Furthermore
, a café and self service
machines have been introduced.
Add a hyphen
self-service
Finally
, to sum it up, the major changes made in the library in two decades are addition
of a snack bar Add an article
the addition
along with
a much advanced
kid’s portion. Add a hyphen
much-advanced
Rest
of the segments Correct article usage
The rest
is
more or less the same with reorganization done.Correct subject-verb agreement
are
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