The table below shows the number of motor vehicles per 1,000 inhabitants in eight countries in 1990 and 2000.

The table below shows the number of motor vehicles per 1,000 inhabitants in eight countries in 1990 and 2000.
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vehicle ownerships per a thousand citizens in eight countries between 1990 and 2000.
Overall
, there was an increase in the number of motor
vehicles
in six countries, with the volume of Brazil and Romania
vehicles
witnessing the most noticeable growth.
In contrast
, the figure for the owned motor
vehicles
in
Bahamas
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experienced a drop;
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Cambodia
data
maintained the same. The figure for Brazil and Romania
transportations
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started at 55 and 68 in 1990, after which it rose significantly to reach the final
data
at 13580 and 8012 in 2000.
Conversely
, the number of Bahamas
vehicles
owned by occupants was
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exceptional
data
that was considered a gradual decline. Simultaneously, the figure for Cambodia started at 1 and
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off towards the end of the period. 68 and 531 were the number of transportations per thousand of citizens in Chile and New Zealand, which witnessed a similar slight rise to 88 and 557 in 2000. Resemble changes, but to greater extents, were seen in the figures for
vehicles
in Jordan and Luxembourg,
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at 50 and 548, followed by a remarkable climb to 157 and 728 in the
last
year.
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