The chart and table below give information about tourists at a particular holiday resort in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table above shows the region of the
tourists
in Australia and the table shows the difference between the regions of the tourists
.
The chart shows that the most tourists
Correct your spelling
came
camed
from both Asia and Europe and that there is only 28 Correct your spelling
come
percent
of Change the spelling
per cent
people
traveled
from Change the spelling
travelled
US
and other countries
The table describes the Correct article usage
the US
tourists
by the length of stay , were
they stay and Correct your spelling
where
there
main activities,
the Asian Replace the word
their
tourists
at
average Change preposition
on
they
stayCorrect pronoun usage
apply
7
daysChange preposition
for 7
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, however,
however
the European people
stays
for 16 days and the American Correct subject-verb agreement
stay
tourists
stays
for 14 days , Change the verb form
stay
also
the European and the
other countries Correct article usage
apply
people
stays
at camps or Correct subject-verb agreement
stay
caravan
but both Asian and American Fix the agreement mistake
caravans
tourists
prefer to stay at hotels,the Asian and American tourists
love sightseeing but the European and the people
from other regions usually like to do the sea activities .
In conclusion the
most Correct article usage
apply
of
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apply
tourists
are from Asia and EuropeSubmitted by khalidashgar23 on
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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tourists, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 7 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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