The line graph below gives information about the number of visitors to three London museums between June and September 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below gives information about the number of visitors to three London museums between June and September 2013.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line graph illustrates the number of people who visited three museums in London within a
period
of 4 months, commencing from June 2013. The highest rate of people that visit the British
Museum
can be observed in July and the number of visitors to
this
Museum
was greater than that of the two other categories. At the beginning of the
period
, the number of British museums was 600 thousand and
this
figure moderately increased to
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around 750 in July
then
dropped suddenly within a month when it reached 500.
this
category to finish over 600 in September. the Natural History
Museum
was over 550 at the beginning of the
period
and decreased sharply reaching under 400 in July
then
remained stable until August and on average 400
while
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a moderate rise to get to over 450 for the rest of the year. The Science
Museum
was the lowest one during the
period
in comparison
the
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other two categories.
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Vocabulary: The word "moderately" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • line graph
  • illustrates
  • number of visitors
  • museums
  • from June to September 2013
  • the British Museum
  • the Natural History Museum
  • the Science Museum
  • overall trend
  • attracted
  • the most visitors
  • fewest visitors
  • peak
  • experienced fluctuations
  • decline
  • highlight
  • dominance
  • consistent decline
  • minor resurgence
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