The line graph below gives information about the number of visitors to three London museums between June and September 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given line graph illustrates the number of people who visited three museums in London within a

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of 4 months, commencing from June 2013. The highest rate of people that visit the British

Museum

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can be observed in July and the number of visitors to

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Museum

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was greater than that of the two other categories. At the beginning of the

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, the number of British museums was 600 thousand and

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figure moderately increased to

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around 750 in July

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dropped suddenly within a month when it reached 500.

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category to finish over 600 in September. the Natural History

Museum

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was over 550 at the beginning of the

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and decreased sharply reaching under 400 in July

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remained stable until August and on average 400

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a moderate rise to get to over 450 for the rest of the year. The Science

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was the lowest one during the

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in comparison

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other two categories.