The line graph below gives information about the number of visitors to three London museums between June and September 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given line graph illustrates the number of people who visited three museums in London within a
period
of 4 months, commencing from June 2013.
The highest rate of people that visit the British Museum
can be observed in July and the number of visitors to this
Museum
was greater than that of the two other categories.
At the beginning of the period
, the number of British museums was 600 thousand and this
figure moderately increased to get
around 750 in July Verb problem
apply
then
dropped suddenly within a month when it reached 500. this
category to finish over 600 in September. the Natural History Museum
was over 550 at the beginning of the period
and decreased sharply reaching under 400 in July then
remained stable until August and on average 400 while
experience
a moderate rise to get to over 450 for the rest of the year.
The Science Wrong verb form
experiencing
Museum
was the lowest one during the period
in comparison the
other two categories.Change preposition
to the
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Vocabulary: The word "moderately" was used 2 times.
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