The table below presents the numbe of children ever born to women aged 40-44 years in Australia for each year the information was collected since 1981.
The table describes the proportion of
children
born to women between the ages of 40 and 44, in Australia. The survey was done four times, from the year 1981 to 2006.
Overall
, it is clear that
having three more children
has reduced substantially over the period. However
, percentage
of birthing two Correct article usage
the percentage
children
remained the highest in all four years.
In 1981, 27.6% of women gave birth to more than three children
; however
in the next 15 years, the figure halved, and eventually dropped to 11%, by 2006. Add a comma
however,
Although
the decline for three children
was not as drastic as four or more children
, the proportion fell from 27.4% (in 1981) to 21.5% (in 2006.)
The percentage of mothers who birthed two children
was at
29%, in 1981. Change preposition
apply
Subsequently
, this
figure rose to 35.6% in the next five years, after which it stayed the same, in 1996 and 2006, at about 38%. The figure for one and no children
, in the given timeframe, almost doubled from their initial value, from 8.5% to 15.9% and 7.6% to 13.2%, respectively.Submitted by sajeendranrajakumar on
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