The graph below shows the avarage closing prices from 2013 rok t

The line graph illustrates the

price

variance of three different valuable metals between 2013 and 2021 .

Overall

,

although

the platinum’s

price

saw

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highest value

initially

, it was overtaken by the palladium

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the end of the

period

.

On the other hand

, gold witnessed a

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price

over the

period

.

The platinum

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was the only precious metal which

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in

price

over the year. The

price

of platinum was around $1,500,000 originally. It steadily decreased over the

period

with around $1,000 per

ounce

in the

last

year. Gold’s

price

fluctuated between approximately $1,000 and $ 1,500 per

ounce

from 2013 to 2019,

then

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its highest value in the

last

two year

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period

around $1,750 per

ounce

. As for the

price

of Palladium, it was half as high as that

Gold

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in 2013 and remained roughly stable at around $700 per

ounce

in the next three years.

Subsequently

, in 2019, the figure surpassed the

price

of Gold and Platinum, peaking

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under $2,500 per

ounce

.