The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.
The table shows data about the underground rail networks in six major cities. It compares the six networks in terms of their age, size and the number of people who use them each year.
It is clear that
the three oldest underground Linking Words
systems
are larger and serve significantly more Use synonyms
passengers
than the newer Use synonyms
systems
.
The London Underground is the oldest Use synonyms
system
, having opened in 1863. It is Use synonyms
also
the largest Linking Words
system
, with 394 Use synonyms
kilometres
of route. The second largest Use synonyms
system
, in Paris, is only about half the size of the London underground, with 199 Use synonyms
kilometres
of route. Use synonyms
However
, it serves more people per year. Linking Words
While
the Tokyo Linking Words
system
is only third in size, it is the most easily used, with 1927 million Use synonyms
passengers
annually.
Of the three newer networks, the Washington DC underground is the most extensive, with 126 Use synonyms
kilometres
of route, compared to only 11 Use synonyms
kilometres
and 28 Use synonyms
kilometres
for the Kyoto and Los Angeles Use synonyms
systems
. The Los Angeles network is the newest, having opened in 2001, Use synonyms
while
the Kyoto network is the smallest and serves only 45 million Linking Words
passengers
per year.
In short, the latest railway Use synonyms
systems
serve fewer Use synonyms
passengers
than the oldest, Use synonyms
due to
the large gap between the Linking Words
kilometres
of their routes.Use synonyms
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