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Write a letter You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. •describe what you enjoyed about the course •say how much cooking you've done since the course •suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer

#cookery #course #school #feedback #•describe #•say #ve #•suggest #offer
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Dear Sir/Madam, I recently finished the cookery
course
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 from your institution and would like to share my feedback on the same.
Firstly
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, a big thank you to all the chefs who taught us. I always had a dream of learning international cuisine.
Although
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 I could have learnt from different YouTube channels, I wanted to learn it in a kitchen with professionals. I opted for the multi-cuisine
course
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. The best thing about the
course
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 was, how well it was designed. Even if somebody who doesn't have any experience, can learn comfortably. I really enjoyed the session on Italian food. It was fun making the pasta starting from the dough preparation. I have done so much cooking after the
course
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. Almost every week I prepare different food for my family. They are a big fan of my Italian cuisine. Another thing, I have a suggestion to include a baking
course
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 in your school. I have a few friends who want to learn baking so that they can open a cafe. Yours faithfully Neha
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task achievement
Your letter is well-structured and addresses all three points in the prompt, but be a bit more specific about what your family thinks of your cooking.
coherence cohesion
The flow of the letter is smooth, but using a few more transitional phrases could help improve the logical structure.
task achievement
Your tone is very polite and appropriate for this kind of formal letter.
coherence cohesion
Your paragraphs are well-organized, each addressing a different point from the prompt clearly.
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