The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The line chart provides information on the
number
of overseas visitors
, visiting three different areas
in a European country. These areas
including
, Replace the word
include
coast
, lakes, and Correct article usage
the coast
mountins
. Throughout the period 1987 to 2007.
Correct your spelling
mountains
Overall
, it is evident that coast
Replace the word
coastal
areas
has
been the most Change the verb form
have
atractive
Correct your spelling
attractive
destinations
throughout the periods, attracting considerable
Change the article
a considerable
the considerable
number
of visitors
in comparison to other destinations
.
In 1987, coast
sites demonstrated a dominating trend, attracting Replace the word
coastal
large
Change the article
a large
the large
number
of visitors
during the years, peaking at 70 thousands
Change to singular
thousand
visitors
, before a minor drop happend
in 1992. Correct your spelling
happened
Similarly
, mountians
Correct your spelling
mountains
areas
, where it displayed an upward trend, starting with only 20 thousands
Change to singular
thousand
visitors
and steadily increasing to nearly 35 thousands
. Change to singular
thousand
However
, lakes
Fix the agreement mistake
lake
destinations
saw a
various variations during the years, Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
initiating
with just 10
Verb problem
starting
thousands
Add the preposition
thousands of
visitors
, this
number
saw a sharp increase peaking at 40 thousands
, following that year the Change to singular
thousand
number
started to gradually increase reaching 70 thousands
. Change to singular
thousand
Nevertheless
, the number
significantly fall to 50 thousands
.
In summary, it is worth noting that by 2002 Change to singular
thousand
coast
Replace the word
coastal
areas
represent
the most attractive Wrong verb form
represented
destinations
, following
it Wrong verb form
followed
lakes
Correct subject-verb agreement
lake
areas
, and the least attravtive
Correct your spelling
attractive
areas
with fewer number of
Correct quantifier usage
apply
visitors
are
Wrong verb form
were
mountins
.Correct your spelling
mountains
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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