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The diagram below shows the plan of a library in 2001 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the plan of a library in 2001 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps illustrate the changes planned for the ground floor of a library between 2001 and 2009.
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, the library underwent extensive renovations, introducing numerous new amenities, including computers, a dedicated children's
section
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, various types of
books
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, and a films and DVDs
area
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, enhancing its appeal to visitors. In 2001, the library's central
area
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 featured eight
tables
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 for reading, situated in the middle of the building. To the right of these
tables
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 was a
section
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 dedicated to newspapers and periodicals. By 2009,
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 space was repurposed into a films and DVDs
section
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, and a new computer
area
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 was established adjacent to it. Concurrently, the number of
tables
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 was reduced, allowing for a more spacious layout. The fiction
room
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, which was located behind the
tables
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 in 2001, was transformed into a children's
books
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section
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 by 2009.
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, a new children's
area
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 was created in front of
this
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section
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 to cater specifically to young readers. The librarian's desk, positioned near the entrance, remained unchanged, maintaining its original location. Significant modifications were made to the left side of the librarian's desk. In 2001,
this
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area
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 housed a self-help
room
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. By 2009,
this
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room
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 was subdivided into multiple sections, including history, fiction, and self-help
books
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.
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, the original history
room
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 was replaced with sections for kitchen, economics, and law
books
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words section, books, area, tables, room with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 4 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • self-service machines
  • computer stations
  • digital resources
  • book sections
  • fiction, non-fiction, reference
  • café area
  • repositioned
  • user preferences
  • management strategies
  • children's area
  • youth engagement
  • educational activities
  • meeting rooms
  • collaborative spaces
  • community events
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