The chart below shows how routinely people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.

The chart below shows how routinely people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.
The chart below shows how routinely
people
in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. The frequency of eating fast food among
people
which they preferred five different times is obvious in different percentages every 3 years. In detail,
according to
2003, over %30 of
people
chose to eat once a week,
while
%30 ate twice a month these numbers were the highest
due to
the bar graph. In 2006, those who marked every day or never reached %5, and the rest were 15 and over.
People
who eat several times a week and
people
who eat a few times a year show almost the same percentage, one of them is 15 and the other is more than 15.
Finally
, those who selected once or twice a month had the highest result, about %35.
To conclude
, in
USA
Correct article usage
the USA
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people
regularly preferred to eat once a week or once or twice a month
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fast food consumption
  • Frequency
  • Dining trends
  • Demographic factors
  • Peak periods
  • Downward/upward trend
  • Lifestyle choices
  • Nutritional awareness
  • Economic impact
  • Health implications
  • Convenience foods
  • Eating habits
  • Statistical evidence
  • Year-over-year comparison
  • Fluctuation
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