The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts showed how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The amount of table
has
shown police Verb problem
shows
budget
where
the money came from, and Correct word choice
and where
Correct article usage
the charts
charts
percentages Fix the agreement mistake
chart
has provides
how it was Wrong verb form
provide
distributedvon
the police Correct your spelling
distributed on
budget
from 2017 to 2018. A
glance at Change preposition
At a
accompanying
data, there is Correct article usage
the accompanying
Correct article usage
a raise
raise
in 2018 than 2017, but Correct your spelling
rise
number
of Change the article
a number
the number
spent
Replace the word
spending
are
gradually dwindling during these Correct subject-verb agreement
is
periode
.
Correct your spelling
periods
Overall
, police
Correct article usage
the police
budget
are
Change the verb form
is
increase
in 2018, and the highest income Wrong verb form
increased
are
from local taxes which Change the verb form
is
climb
from 91.2m to 102.3m. Looking Wrong verb form
climbed
more
details Change preposition
at more
that
slowest climb of Correct determiner usage
the
budget
from other resouce
(eg grants) by only adding 0,5m than a year before. Correct your spelling
resources
National
Correct article usage
The national
goverment
Correct your spelling
government
spent
gradually Wrong verb form
spending
increase
by 2,3%.
Wrong verb form
increased
According to
percentages
of money Correct article usage
the percentages
was
spent, there is Unnecessary verb
apply
decrease
Add an article
a decrease
the decrease
of
Change preposition
in
salaries
of the officers and staff from 75% to 69%, in Correct article usage
the salaries
compare
with the Replace the word
comparison
increase
of
technology spent which is Change preposition
in
Add an article
an increase
increase
from 8% to 14%. Building and transport Wrong verb form
increased
has
stagnancy percentage in 2017 by 17% and Change the verb form
have
also
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Vocabulary: Replace the words budget, increase with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "climb" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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