in some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live it. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

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more and more interested in historical places
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reasons to find out the story of historical building
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, and ways to discover them.
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and mention several ways to research these
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why
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for
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stories about old
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are because they need to know about
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of the
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were
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built
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several occasions, so that can give spirit and motivational support for everyone
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living
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. Different purposes are
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in size, color, furnish, and
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or
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that
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in every
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a building
that
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different
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. Bright
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and larger
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are usually for meeting
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or
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that give energy to
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who
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in
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where coloured with warm
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furnish that give us
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the cozy
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feeling to reduce our attention, so it can be suitable for
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to take a rest.
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, unique
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architecture
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to research and come. And historical building from a person who
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wellknown
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usually will drive
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put on interest.
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usually look for the data of the building from literature which
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, or from direct and indirect
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from the guide or audiovisual resource. In Indonesia,
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National Monument,
people
can access it by visiting the building and
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, or we can ask
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guide to explain the history.
On the other hand
, we can access that
information
by open social media
such
as
youtube
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and others.
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, it is advantageous for everyone to
knew
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about
history
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the history
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of building. They can find the
information
by direct
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of the former owner or keeper, and
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common
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get
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information
from internet searching.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Historical research
  • Genealogy
  • Architectural styles
  • Heritage
  • Relics
  • Oral history
  • Archival records
  • Museum exhibits
  • Historical societies
  • House tours
  • Renovation projects
  • Original blueprints
  • Careful documentation
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