in some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live it. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?
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the history
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buildings
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colour
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cosy
place
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a place
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architecture
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is very
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well known
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public
put on interest.
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the public
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, or from direct and indirect Change the verb form
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from the guide or audiovisual resource. In Indonesia, Correct your spelling
storytelling
for example
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National Monument, Correct article usage
the Indonesian
people
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tour
guide to explain the history. Correct article usage
a tour
On the other hand
, we can access that information
by open social media such
as youtube
and others.
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YouTube
To sum up
, it is advantageous for everyone to knew
about Change the form of the verb
know
history
of building. They can find the Add an article
the history
information
by direct information
of the former owner or keeper, and public
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The essay addresses both parts of the prompt by discussing reasons why people are interested in the history of their homes and ways to research.
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